Thursday, 25 June 2015

PROCESS WRITING : 1. OVERALL PLAN OF ESSAY



Now, write out the overall plan of your essay.
You may need to give your essay a title.
Let’s decide on IT PAYS TO DO A GOOD DEED

IT PAYS TO DO A GOOD DEED

INTRODUCTION
drizzling in the morning - business was bleak
because children were indoors

BODY
Paragraph 1:
drizzling became heavier - seek shelter in old hut
 - waited for rain to stop - his mind began to wander.

Paragraph 2:
8 years ago he was successful businessman
- but he squandered all his wealth - now selling
putu mayam

Paragraph 3:
to expand his business - need to employ workers
- his children can help

Paragraph 4:
rudely awakened by thunder and lightning
- realised that he was day dreaming

Paragraph 5:
rain stopped - only a little is sold - pushed bicycle
- reached sharp bend - tree across road

Paragraph 6:
Being public-spiritedness - tried to remove tree 
from road - failed - on-coming bus - stood in middle
of road - bus stopped

CONCLUSION
Driver and passengers grateful
- bought Murugaya's putu mayam

PROCESS WRITING : 1. PLANNING



Basically, there are 5 steps to go through a process in writing.
1.    PLANNING
2.    WRITING A FIRST DRAFT
3.    REVISING AND EDITING
4.    REWRITING
5.    PROOFREADING

Let's say you have decided on writing a story on moral values
about public-spiritedness.
 



1. PLANNING
In this stage, you need to brainstorm your ideas. Don't worry 
about mistakes in language or spelling. Just concentrate on the idea.


You need to write down a brief outline for your story.


early in the morning - drizzling - went out to sell putu mayam
- rain became heavier - seek shelter in hut - wait for rain
to stop - started to daydream - woke up by thunder and
lightning - rain stopped - went out - reached bend - tree
across road - tried to remove tree - failed - on coming bus
- stood in middle - bus stopped - driver and passengers
- grateful - bought putu mayam.


Next, you need to organise the outline into paragraphs
and come up with an outline of the story.
The easiest method is to use the WH-questions.


a. What happen that morning?
- drizzling in the morning
Result : business bleak
Reason : children stay indoors

b. Where did he take shelter?
- drizzling became heavier
Result : seek shelter
Reason : wait for rain to stop – mind began to wander

c. What happen 8 years ago?
- successful businessman but now poor
Result : sells putu mayam
Reason : squandered wealth away

d. How to expend business?
- employ workers
- own children help

e. When did he wake from daydreaming?
- thunder and lightning flashed across sky

f. When rain stop, what did he do? Where did he go?
- pushed bicycle until reach sharp bend
- saw tree across road

g. Why did he try to remove tree?
- public-spiritedness
Reason : dangerous to road users
Result : failed to do so

h. What happen next?
- on-coming bus
- stood in middle of road
Reason : to stop bus
Result : saved driver and passengers

i. What happen in the end?
- driver and passengers grateful
Result : bought all the putu mayam
 

 

Friday, 19 June 2015

REPORT WRITING : EXAMINATION POINT OF VIEW


GUIDED WRITING : MODEL ANSWER



THE ENVIRONMENTAL CLUB OF SMK GETING
The Environmental Club had another fulfilling year in 2014. When it was first launched in 1997, it had only 45 students.Due to the tremendous support from the students, its members increased to 350 this year. Its aim is to help save the  environment of the school as well as the community.

Activities:
Several activities were carried out in 2014. These included trips, campaigns, fundraising and annual party.

1. Recycling Campaign
    The Recycling Campaign was the main project for the year 2014. The objective of this campaign was to encourage members to recycle paper rather than throw it away. It was a three-month campaign, beginning in early January and the response from the members was encouraging. Participants were encouraged to bring old newspapers, magazines and paper. After one month, we managed to collect more than 20 tonnes of paper.

2. Taman Orkid Tengku Anis
    Besides that, the club had organised a trip to an orchid garden which is known as Taman Orkid Tengku Anis, in Pengkalan Chepa. Apart from orchids, there are also other species of flowers. 40 members participated in this trip and they were accompanied by 2 teachers. It was really an enjoyable outing because they saw many species of flowers that they had never seen before.

3. Fundraising for Landscaping
    Next, we organised a Food Fare a week before the First Term Holidays. The aim of this activity was to raise fund for the landscaping project located beside the Science Laboratory. In addition, we also organised Canteen Day as a supplementary activity to the Food Fare.

4. Annual party
    Before the academic year was over, the club held an annual party for all its members. Each member was given a certificate of appreciation for their hard work. A certificate of appreciation was also given to Encik Wan Ismail, our advisor, for his guidance and dedication.

Last but not least, we urge more students to join us for an even more exciting time in years to come.

Prepared by,
Julia
.........................
( JULIA BTE MAMAT )
SMK GETING
KELANTAN

GUIDED WRITING : A REPORT FOR SCHOOL MAGAZINE



EXERCISE
As the secretary of The Environmental Club of your school, you have
been asked to write a report about the club and its activities for your
school magazine.
Use the notes below to write your report.

* Started in 1997
   - 350 members
   - aim: help save the environment

* Activities
   - recycling campaign
   - a trip to an orchid garden
   - fundraising for landscaping
   - annual party

When writing the report, you should remember
* use the correct format of a report
* give it a title
* use all the notes given
* urge more students to join the club

SENTENCE PATTERNS : SIMPLE SENTENCE


Thursday, 11 June 2015

MAKING SENTENCES : PARTS OF SPEECH



THE PARTS OF SPEECH THAT ARE USED
TO MAKE A COMPLETE SENTENCE

1. NOUN
A noun is used to name a person, an animal, a thing or a place.
eg.
The boy is intelligent.
Melaka is a state.
That building is tall.
Not all snakes are poisonous.

ARTICLES ' a ' and ' an ' are used to show singular nouns
while ' the ' is used to show a specific noun.
eg.
That animal is a dog.
This fruit is an apple.
The sun is hot.

2. PRONOUN
A pronoun is used to replace a noun.
a. We use ' he ' to replace a male, ' she ' to replace
a female and ' it ' to replace inanimate objects.
eg.
Ahmad is a teacher.
He is a teacher.

Siti is my sister.
She is my sister

The cat is an animal.
It is an animal.


The table is made of wood..
It is made of wood.

b. To show plural nouns, we use ' you ' , ' they '
or ' we '.
eg.
Teacher to students:
You must not make too much noise.

Jeffery , Jane and I are classmates.
We are classmates.

Kumanan and Chong Beng are neighbours.
They are neighbours.

Dogs, cat and tigers are animals.
They are animals.

3. ADJECTIVE
An adjective is used to describe a noun.
eg.
The shirt is old and torn.
Ali is a hardworking student.
My car is red.


4. VERB
A verb is used to show an action.
eg.
The little puppy barks.
She walks to school.
Yesterday I ate a sour mango.
The teacher is teaching in class now.

5. ADVERB
An adverb is used to modify a verb but it can also
modify an adjective or another adverb.
eg.
The old man walks slowly along the road.
My father always drives carefully on a rainy day.

6. PREPOSITIONS
A preposition is used to show the relationship
between the subject and the object of the sentence.
It is usually placed after the action word.
eg.
I like to sit by the window.
The salesman drives all the way from Kuantan.
The dog chased after the cat.

7. CONJUNCTION
A conjunction is used to join words in a sentence.
eg.
My favourite subjects are English and Science.
You can either drink coffee or tea.
Both Susie and Betty went to the zoo yesterday.

8. INTERJECTION
An interjection is used to show feelings and
expressions.
eg.
a. Happy Birthday!
b. Look out!
c. Ouch!

Tuesday, 9 June 2015

CATCH US IF YOU CAN : An Overview of the Plot



AN OVERVIEW OF THE PLOT

1. EXPOSITION
1. Rory is a young boy who lives with his Granda who is old and very forgetful.
2. Granda always forgets to put off his pipe which he keeps in his coat pocket.
4. Also Granda always misplaces Rory's homework and Rory have to make up excuses to
    explain to his teacher, Mrs. Foley.
5. Darren suggests that Granda should be in a home which makes Rory disagrees and gets angry.
6. Granda and Rory attend Parents' Night at Rory's school.
7. Granda meets Mrs. Foley. They talk about Rory.
8. Granda forgets to put off his pipe and leaves it in his coat. It causes a fire and burns his coat as 
    well as Mrs. Foley's expensive coat.
9. Mrs. Foley is displeased.

2. RISING ACTION
1. Val Jessup, a social worker, is assigned to look into their situation.
2. One day after school, Rory comes back to find the flat on fire. Granda had left
     the chip pan on.
3. Granda is hospitalised for smoke inhalation.
4. Rory is sent to the children's home in Castle Street.
5. He will be there temporarily as Granda recovers.
6. Rory does not like to stay at Castle Street because Tess bullies him.
7. Granda recovers soon but is sent to Rachnadar, home for the elderly.

CATCH US IF YOU CAN : A REVIEW



CATCH US IF YOU CAN
BY
CATHERINE MACPHAIL
Born in 1946 in Greenock, Scotland.
She is a writer of children's and adult's books.
She tackles emotional and contemporary issues in schools and society
which are inspired by her own background and personal experiences.

CATCH US IF YOU CAN
is a heart-warming story of love between Rory and his grandfather.
It is a story of adventure and escape.
Granda is dependent on Rory because he is forgetful and often misplaces
things. Rory on the other hand, does everything possible to make his Granda
comfortable. One day Granda accidentally sets their home on fire and was warded.
Soon after, Rory is taken into foster care at Castle Street and Granda is sent to
Rachnadar. Rory hates being away from Granda and hatches an escape plan.
Their Great Escape is not easy as the authorities are hot on their trail. Their escape
is full of unexpected twists and turns and a number of people help them along their
journey. All is well in the end, as Rory and Granda are reunited with Rory's father,
Jeff McIntosh.

Note: If it is wrong to include the author's 
photograph, then my apologies. I'll remove it.